English Composition I Assignment 8

Task	Comments	Due Date	Points Possible	Points Earned	Your Grade

Phase 4 Individual Project

Mon (8/10)

150

148

A

Grade Comments:

Jennifer, it was a pleasure having you in my class this session. I can see improvement in your work. You conveyed your message well in your work. Little more organization was needed. Please take what you learned from this class and apply it to the next one. Feedback is given for each aspect of your assignment below: Paragraph 1: What skills can you apply from this class to future courses at Colorado Technical University Online? You addressed this question correctly and provide detailed information. Great Job! (30/30) Paragraph 2: In what ways can the ability to write an organized and informative essay help you in your work outside of school? You addressed this section correctly as well. Way to go! (30/30) Paragraph 3: What have you learned about the idea of “audience” as a result of this academic experience, and why does knowing one’s audience matter? You discussed the requirements in this section as well. Well Done! (30/30) Paragraph 3: Why does excellence in writing matter as much as excellence in any other field of study? You also addressed this section correctly as well. (30/30) Overall/Grammar/Format/Readability/Intro/Conclusion/Length 3-4 Overall I was very pleased with the quality of your work. Your assignment was easy to read and understand. You assignment had “flow” and logic to it. You had a intro and a conclusion. You also met the length requirement. Your assignment was formatted correctly as well. I noticed some of your sentence were not structure correctly. I know you will continue to work on this in your future courses.Other than that, awesome job! 28/30 Score: 148/150

My comments:

Wow, this teacher was tough, but I made the grade!

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